Saturday, May 17, 2008

phoem 2

the sand drop
by the ice of sun

the air lost
by the rain of forest

the water ice
by the hand of fire

love will lost
with the key of feeling

good-bye my dream
I care for that anymore

4 comments:

Running First Think Later said...

Do you make this poetry yourself?
hmmm......
You're so poetic,hehe...

Dea wa SheeNRa said...

I make it, when I'm in high school... forget bout it, it the worst... I don't really like it...

Running First Think Later said...

hahaha...
I think it's a good phoem.
I and my best friend also like make phoem.
My friend does it everytime, but I just write if I'm in bad mood.

Dea wa SheeNRa said...

Just trying to make it,

coz we are learn to make it, right??? ^^

hope the best for us...